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Mariely 01-15-2012 06:48 AM

Fluff vs. Diamonds
I just had to share this great video I found on Melissa Forney's new blog Teacher Spectacular ( The video shows a demonstration that will help students add diamonds to their writing (details the reader can picture) instead of fluff becuase fluff doesn't hold up. Check it out:

You'll have to wait a bit for the video to load but I think it's worth watching. If you have Smart Boards in your classroom or Promethean boards, you can even show the video to your students as a mini-lesson. I hope you find it just as useful as I have. :)

ShiningStar09 01-24-2012 05:44 PM

I will defitnitely use this.

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