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Sharon's Secret Recipe for Freckle Juice (from the story):
One glass makes an average amount of freckles. To get like Nicky Lane drink two glasses.
Mix up all these things together-stir well and drink fast.
-juice from one lemon
-pepper and salt
-a speck of onion
PS: The faster you drink it the faster you get F.R.E.C.K.L.E.S