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Old 07-21-2008, 10:05 AM
 
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I have a bulletin board for "Dead" Words. These are words that the students can't use when writing. They have to find a more vivid synonym for it. I am trying to think of all the dead words that I can. Any suggestions? Here are some I have already... big, little, hot, cold, tall, and short. Thanks!


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does this in her room. She has tombstones in a grassy field. It takes up most of her back wall. She glued cork tiles to the wall and created a huge bb. I do the same thing, except I have "Wild Words" with monkeys. Any words will work. Look in a thesaurus to help you. Good luck.
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awesome
bad
cool
fine
good
great
happy
interesting
look
nice
really
said
so
very

Here's a longer list with synonyms.
http://www.phschool.com/iText/wag/br.../OW_index.html
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Old 07-21-2008, 06:29 PM
 
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Just an idea...
Around October I introduce mini-lessons on word choice. I made an area called Word Grave Yard with poster size tombstones. At the top I write the overused word and students make a list of synonyms to use in place of it.
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Said is Dead!
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One of our 5th gr. teachers has that written on a paper tombstone. Some other suggestions:

-cool
-nice
-went
-good
-bad


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More vivid word lesson
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Here is a site I found that gives a lesson for teaching more vivid word choice using Steven Kellogg's book "Chicken Little".


http://learnnc.org/lp/pages/3556?style=print

Additionally, below is a great list of "dead words" with alternatives. I'm going to make these charts and have the students put them in their mini office.......could put in writers notebook if that is how you do writing instructional aids.

http://www.manteno.k12.il.us/kcarlil...dead_words.htm

GOTTA LOVE THE WEB!!!!!!!!!
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I cut out a tombstone, laminated it, and wrote R.I.P Dead Words and then we listed them and bid them a fond farewell. We then celebrated their passing by making a list of better words to use instead. Students no that they can not use those words in their writing.
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My kids make...
Old 07-23-2008, 05:49 AM
 
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these synonym posters and we hang them in the room.

http://www.teacherweb.com/MI/Central...e/synonyms.pdf

There's the link to their spot on my website.


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Thanks once again
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Thanks PT teachers once again.
Love the posters Christina. I'll have to get the Chicken Little book. great references!

I usually start with "Put said to Bed" and have a bed drawn on chart paper and we fill.

Then at October we do a huge descriptive word unit with a Hallowe'en witch/creature that they have to describe with several adjectives for each part. The kids then create their creature. Once done these are put up andas each child reads their description the other students have to pick out the creature.
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Old 07-27-2008, 06:34 PM
 
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Love the posters and especially the fonts you used. What program do you use or where did you get the fonts?
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I think once you start to look at your kids writing you will see what words need to go on the dead words list. You could even challenge your kids if they are peer editing to find words that they think are overused.
I hadn't thought about doing this for writing. I did this with words I was tired of hearing them say to each other. " Yo Mama" for example.
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I love the idea of the "Dead words" however,
Old 08-02-2008, 12:46 PM
 
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I would advise you to check w/your principal before posting a fabulously laminated poster on the wall. I did this last year and was told, not so politely to remove it immediately.

This year I found a poster called Put Nice on Ice (ReallyGood Stuff) which I will use instead of the the tombstone. I highly doubt anyone will be offended by my nice igloo poster.
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Those are great! For 6th grade, I add things, stuff, and any form of get, got, etc.
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Old 08-17-2008, 05:47 PM
 
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nice, good, happy, sad, stuff
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I have a flashlight pattern. I write a dead word in the handle of each flashlight. The students use a thesaurus to add a synonym in the beam of the flashlight. I post them on a bulletin board so the students can cast a vivid light on their writing. I really like the tombstone, but my principal did not care for that idea!
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wonderful, awesome, terrific
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I remember this lesson from the 8th grade, or somewhere around then. Mostly, I remember this lesson because I thought it would be funny to write a poem using ALL the Dead Words. I wish I still had it, what I remember of the poem was the last phrase, which went

"All of a sudden, pretty is dead! Now I know I've lost my head!"

Words I remember from our list are:

Suddenly, or all of a sudden

Pretty

Like

Said [because saying Said is boring.]

Boring [since were mentioning it.]

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